Above is my printed flowchart with some written critiques. Suggestions from my peers included lining up the title & the key, switch the type & drop shadow colors in my title, stylizing the arrow to match the title treatment, make sure the arrows in the key are consistent with the arrows in the actual chart, & shrink or abbreviate some of the text to fit the constraints of the boxes.
Other suggestions included lightening the background, changing the shapes in the key from black to light gray, shrinking all text, enlarging arrows to distinguish path taken versus that not, & watching my use of informal language & quotes.
Here is my final flowchart. Just a few things I revised: arrows are more stylized, some text is smaller to lessen line tension, the key is labeled & has round edges & refined stylization to match the title, & some wording was revised.
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